The Og's Flood
The Og looked on at the ark, wondering what he had done to deserve to not be allowed on the boat with everyone else. He saw the giraffes, elephants, dogs, cats, snakes, and every other creature on the earth. They were all dry and seemed to be happy, which irritated him greatly. He had tried to get on the boat, had tried to live with the rest of them, but he had not been allowed in. Noah, however, had had other plans. He insisted that the Og had to stay out in the waters, claiming that he was too big to fit in the ark. He didn't know who gave Noah the right to make decisions like this, but he didn't like it. He vowed to spend the rest of the 40 days and nights of the flood making his life and everyone else's on the boat miserable.
A representation of the flood waters that the Og endured
while everyone was on the ark. Source: Wikimedia Commons
Despite the Og's greatest efforts, when the waters began to recede, he saw that the ark was still thriving and that everyone on board was perfectly fine. He was overcome with jealousy once again. Noticing that the waters were much lower now, the Og took off into the distance and vowed to come up with a better plan. He was going to get revenge for how miserable he had been the past days, he just had to figure out how.
Author's Note
I modeled this after the Noah story from the Folklore of the Holy Land collection. It's original form just briefly mentioned the Og and the fact that he wanted to destroy the ark and everyone in this, but it didn't really give a reason for why he felt that way. With that in mind, I wanted to give the Og a voice so I decided to make a more developed creature that was jealous because of his size. However, even with the reason given, he still wasn't able to destroy the ark but he leaves at the end, determined to get revenge somehow.
Hi Hannah!
ReplyDeleteI love how you give this character more meaning and a bigger role in the story you created. To be honest, I never have read the original story, so I am not really aware of what is to happen, but you definitely kept me engaged with the story. The image really helps tie your story together, and the author's note is super helpful in allowing readers like myself, who haven't read this story before, to really get a grasp of what you were trying to accomplish with this story. Nice job!
Hi Hannah! At first I was picturing the Og as this tiny little fluff ball animal that none of the other animals would let on the ark and I just felt so sad for the little guy. Then you described him as the biggest animal who has hooves and I got over it! I thought this was a really unique take on the original story and it was a perfect way to kind of explore a character you wanted to know more about. It was a fun and easy read overall so great job!
ReplyDeleteHannah, first of all, this is a really interesting blog setup! I have not seen anyone else with a similar blog format. I had never heard of the Og before reading this story. Is it a part of the original story of Noah's Ark, or just from the unit that you read? I felt pretty bad for the Og, as leaving him off of the ark by himself seems very lonely, and it seems like he didn't do anything wrong to deserve that. I would have liked to know what happened once the flood waters receded completely, and if the Og managed to succeed. Good job on this story.
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